Arknights - Fandub Project
EmDeer for Amiya
The public face of Rhodes Island and its top executive, Amiya appears to be a young and inexperienced girl but she is a universally trusted and highly experienced operator. In spite of her qualifications, Amiya's values and emotional state are constantly being tested during operations, lending to scarring and enlightening experiences..
Amiya is a headstrong and idealistic young woman, yet understands that sacrifices must be made during operations to ensure the safety of her team and the infected. She carries with her a genetic deficiency that's slowly killing her along with Oripathy infection, yet she remains resolute in her cause for both Rhodes Island and the world in spite of this.
Voice: Medium High; Stalwart - Caring - Hopeful
Meeting Player - Elated Greeting
Doctor, I'm so glad that we've met again. We'll be comrades from now on, so let's take care of each other.Veteran Memory - Sorrowful Resolution
What I saw that day... the despair stuck in my throat, the futile attempts to scream... I wish to bury all these deep inside my mind and never revisit them again..Combat Quotes - Thoughtful Force
I know what you're thinking. Are you afraid of me?
Pitch is almost there, lower it down a little bit since I think your voice is sounding strained from how high you're making it but it doesn't impact your tone all that much. It's difficult to say if your tone is too actively joyous, but I can say that you need to hold a bit more subtlety behind your lines if you want to make this sound more natural. Your delivery is well paced, but the annunciation in certain parts, like the initial section of your first line, are making this sound slightly forced in terms of the flow of your words.
Thank you so much for your feedback! I didn't feel the strain, but it could be from doing a lower pitch than what I've been auditioning with. Expanding my range is something I'm trying to work on, so I definitely appreciate you pointing that out! I also read the second comment and agree that as I listen to this, I can sense the force I'm putting into it. I'll try to work on making it sound more natural! Thanks again! I know you have a lot of work already, so I really appreciate the time you're taking to give feedback! I'll try again, if only to improve myself.