Arknights - Fandub Project
ehrinwells for Mephisto
A high officer within Reunion's military circle, Mephisto is an unscrupulous and particularly sadistic member of Reunion that holds Tallulah's ideals as religious gospel and her as a messianic figure for Reunion. This has lent Mephisto's mental state to deteriorate to one that holds individual lives as expendable for the cause, to the point that his men are often quoted to follow out of fear rather than respect and with nearly every other Reunion officer holding him in contempt.
Mephisto holds himself as a zealous member of Reunion, holding his position with that of a dignified and honorable man, which is a lie to hide his own intense sadism and even harsher insecurity. Along with Tallulah, no one really knows how much regarding Mephisto's history, only that he was an originium user who specialized in revitalization art to mend sinew and bone.
Voice: Medium - Medium-High; Eloquent - Prideful - Psychotic
Introducing Himself to Rhodes Island - Faux Courtesy
Well well, allow me to apologize on Crownslayer's behalf for her rudeness. You may call me, Mephisto.Drawing out Amiya - Boastful Gloat
How long do you intend to keep hiding, my dear rabbit of Chernobog? I saw your little rabble sneaking about, so I thought you might have been up to something.Retreating From Lungmen - Panicked Shouting
If we weren't betrayed, then who could have done it?! Tallulah would never make a mistake...so she must have planned for this...
Pitch here is close, could be a little higher to better aid in the character's tone but I don't know if it'll fit that well with your tone. Given this, I think the issue here is that you're trying too hard to be threatening and aggressive rather than conniving and smug. Delivery can fit that kind of tone, since you annunciation well for your lines but just not in the correct tone for this. Change this, as the pieces are there but you just need to get your foundation set up.
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it. In a second attempt, if I may ask, I should aim for a more snide and cocky attitude, and the current pitch and tone are okay? Or should I lessen the gruffness.
Yes, please lower the gruffness but make sure you add more snide and cockiness to it since it's coming off more aggressive to it. Pitch and tone are otherwise fine.