Trust me, you did great.And the same for what you did for Pan. Both were nice improvements from your first try with them. And you told me that you weren't sure what the voice of Pan would sound like in your first try. Forgive me for not making it clear. My ideal voice for Pan was to sound sweet yet shy, but still sound as high as Tikki's or Plagg's. Again, sorry if I wasn't clear about that. And as for your reply about editing, I'd like for you to send me at least one of your works of editing to see if I like it, and it seems to me that you've had a lot of self learning. Finally, don't worry about your improv. Sometimes I'm not the greatest at that either. :D