Kagerou Daze Project [CLOSED FOR JUDGING]
loopyhoopz14 for Hiyori Asahina
Lines in quotations are spoken, so please sound as if you're quietly mummbling to yourself on the first line. As for the second line, please sound slightly spiteful, yet sorrowful.
"I kind of hate summer..."
“My sister ran away from home. She probably didn't even know I was born. The first time I saw her was when she was in her coffin.”
Sing Kagerou Days and/or a song of your choice.
Heeeeeeeeeeeyo! Your accent is so cuuute :3 Bad Points: 1. I feel like you could have done better on your second line. I feel like it was too spiteful. 2. I'm gonna get really technical, sorry, but there is this one word in your song that sounds to slangy. "Drippin'" sounds too slangy rather than "Dripping". Good Points: 1. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! YOUR VOICE IS SO CUTE AND YOU'RE, LIKE, MY CANNON HIYORI QWQ 2. You hit the notes very well! I must apologize if my second bad point seemed really technical, it's just that your audition was really good so decided to be a little more nit-picky with it. Thanks again for auditioning!
Don't apologize for the second bad point; any feedback is helpful and fine with me. Thank you for your comment uwu