Persona 5 Manga Dub: Chapter 1
Jem for Joker
Joker needs a calm/laid back teenage male tone, but i also need someone who isn't afraid of showing emotions either for this guy
(Questioning and curious): "Kamo-...shida? King of the castle?"
(Slightly confused and concerned): "Huh? Where did this app come from? Did I my phone bump around in my pocket and download it by mistake?"
(Slightly disgusted): "Curry for breakfast?"
Hey man! So you have a great tone for the character! Great audition! Just a few things however, I feel the second line for the emotions piece, it could use a little tweaking. I also heard a lot of background noise and at one point I think I heard you bump your keyboard. You have a great voice and potential though! The last line was exactly how I wanted it to sound though! Thank you so much for auditioning!
Also some more advice, I could hear your breathe takes. Usually those needed to be edited out for just a smooth sounding line. Always take a breathe before saying the line and then try the line! Please don't take my words to harshly, I am still learning too! I just want to help fellow VAs out with honest feedback! :)
Thank you so much for the feedback! As a beginner, I'll take all the advice I can get! So thank you again!~