Nice audition melody! Good Aspects: 1. Nice vibrato! A really great touch when it comes to singing. 2. You have a sweet voice, like you're singing a lullaby. 3. You seem to have good breath control and connect phrases well. You're also pretty well in tune. Aspects that need Improvement: 1. Your utilization of dynamics is a good touch and all, but I think sometimes you tend to crescendo and decrescendo a bit too much/too dramatically in a small span of time. 2. Near the end of Shinigami Record, you began to whisper-sing. A soft tone is nice and all, but in that particular spot it was almost as if your voice was dying out/fading away from the mic. 3. (Ok this is more just my interpretation/speculation of Azami's character/voice) I think of the two recordings of Azami's lines that you said, the second was the better one. When I think of Azami, I don't particularly view her as an overly emotional character; however, when it comes to voice acting, it's hard to replicate that kind of persona (especially with those lines for that particular situation) without sounding flat and monotone, so adding a little bit of emotion into the line sounds better.