I recommend not submitting a voice demo unless you're confident in your recording. If you tell the project manager that you rushed during the recording I am pretty sure that they might not even listen to it. In the first part you spoke so fast that you cut most of the words short and blurred the sentence together without any pause. I'm not trying to be mean, so please don't take it that way. I want everyone to get a fair chance, and respect what the project owner is asking for. I don't think he or she rushed the project, so we shouldn't rush an audition, Good luck!