Hallo kawaiioverdrivu! Thank you for your audition! Bad Points: 1. Every so often it sounds as if you either strain your voice a slight bit or can't hit the note. 2. Work on your breathing so that you can actually sing one section of the song instead of trying to take in one take. You're only human, hence you need to breath. 3. I would like to here the spoken lines actually spoken. Yes, they are taken from JubyPhonic's lyrics, but nonetheless, hearing your actual voice is important for sections of the songs. Good Points: 1. Good audio. You have a nice clear microphone or something because I can clearly hear your voice. 2. Good blend between audio and your voice. 3. Little variations in there with the melody are a nice touch.