RWBY Abridged
tooMuchSalt247 for Blake Belladonna
3rd character of the Squad. And for Blake I almost completely rebooted her character. So, dont go off the the original too much just use it as an idea. I want her to still sound mysterious and edgy like she always mad.
For Blake her change is that now she hates humans as she was raised with no humans around and has to now live with them for certain circumstances which are unknown no one knows her.
Blake: escaping from your problems and past I suppose
Blake: well depends if you have something I want… I'm not here to make friends… so no go.
Blake: wait you know Weiss now… (whisper/low voice as if planning something evil) maybe this can work after all if I friend them
Not bad but I think this a little too happy. Sounds like you said it with a smile in your face not that it's a bad thing I'm glad you sound happy auditioning for my project just i can hear your smile. Does that sound weird idk
Thanks for your feedback! It makes sense, and I'll use this to improve.