RWBY Abridged
m3M0ryHuN73R for Ozpin
Ozpin in this show will be more serious more calculated and more cold. However I need some fun with the guy too since this is an Abridged. He will stay the same usually.
For his voice sound mature, and reasonable should be good with those as basis and maybe the original might be a good inspiration.
Ozpin: Silver eyes… very pretty at that… *ahem* sorry for being creepy
Ozpin: To learn that specific weapon, you must either have a death wish or something special about you
Ozpin: That's why we will throw you into a survival of the fittest test it will teach you way faster. The only way to succeed is to do what your instincts tell you to do.
Not a bad take but you emphasize a couple of words a little to fast makes it seem unnatural. Like the last line 'tell you... (Pause) to do' felt off other than that I think it was good
Thank you so much for the feedback!