RWBY Abridged
User_enchanted for Ruby Rose
Our Main character of the series RWBY Abridged. For any one interested auditioning for this role you do not have to imitate the original. Just sound innocent and cute I suppose.
She is a huge weeb in this Abridged and can go 0-100 real quick in terms of emotions. Emotions are her main drive to go on about her day so I want to hear you best sad, crying, excited, and screams. I like to reboot her character a little so don't base too much off the original.
Ruby: (explosive anger) it's not paranoia! (More calm) Ok I been avoiding school because I know my mom came here and (sad) ultimately died.
Ruby: (hidden anger) What did you just say!?
Ruby: it's not weeb shit it's art
At first I thought you skipped the paranoia line but I have be tricked bamboozled and even fooled. In all seriousness the paranoia line sounds like you held back a little on the scream I want to hear you scream as a secret was just revealed. even though you gave a good sad in the first line you trailed of into a almost cry which isn't really the sadness I was aiming for I want her to be depressed. Buuut now I can see you aren't afraid of using crying in your acting which is a definite plus. Also audio kind of low raise the gain just a tad I think it should be fixed
I see, thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate the guides, I'll definitely keep it in mind. ^^