Perpetual Chains (Original RPG Maker game)
soul for Richard (Main/Main)
No! This isn't over, I cannot fail! You're not my friend, you're a monster! (In battle moves) Hexaslash! Heptaslash! Octaslash! Decaslash!
Please don't make this harder than it already is. I promise to give you a quick and painless death.
Muhahaha!!! Where is your god now!? Go on call out to him, plead for his protection! If he is all powerful then he should be able to strike me down where I stand! Hahaha! Well! Im waiting! Scream for me! Let your melody of pain reach the ears of the mighty Alpha! Hmmm....Im still alive, your god is boring! All that power and hes not even going to use it. Maybe he enjoys your suffering as much as I do!? Well you can ask him yourself when Im finished with you Muhahahaha!!!
Sooo, obviously I have to work on my maniacal laugh. But I hope you can give me some feedback on the rest of my performance. I would really appreciate anything you have to say :)
Well you give it energy, the problem is that it's far too breathy. It sounds like your saying the lines after running a marathon
Well you give it energy, the problem is that it's far too breathy. It sounds like your saying the lines after running a marathon
I'll have to agree with you on the breathy part. Unfortunately its hard for me to maintain power in my voice for extended periods right now due to being sick, but I figured I would give it a shot anyways. It's definitely something I'm working on though, and I appreciate your feedback!