Blue Boundary: The Visual Novel
JeffRaymer for Dares
A 14 year old boy returning home to find himself, discovers his psychic abilities and must master his powers and link with his friends to face off against malevolent spirits.
High - medium ranged voice. Underdeveloped for a 14 year old.
(Soft, broken voice)
“No. I don’t... I don't belong. This world has nothing for me. I don't belong anywhere. No one will miss me"
"Why did I have to survive? If I'd died back then, it would have been over. Now that I've survived, I have to keep going... Even when no one cares."
"Just shut up! Don't compare us like we're the same! You're just what's left of the people who thought immortality in a half-life was the easy way out to facing life's hardships! You won't confuse me anymore, I know who I am! I'm Dares - and I'm going to kick your shadowy asses back to Purgatory!"
Thanks for your audition! The second half of your audition was great, amazing energy, perfect amount of emotion and great levels too. Your first half however fell off a bit, the sadness and sense of hopelessness was kind of missed and sounded more whiny. Other than that, solid audition.
Thanks so much for the feedback! I will work on the first half and see if I can have it fit the tone a bit better.