Thank you for taking the time to audition. I noticed there was a buzzing in your audio that was distracting to listen to. If you are able to remove that, your audition would be much stronger. If you are using Audacity or a similar program, try looking up how to use the noise removal feature to see if that is able to help remove the noise. In terms of delivery, the first and third line were great. The second line felt too fast. There are long pauses between the parts of that line, which you did place, but when you were talking it felt too quick. Slow it down a bit to emphasize the reflective nature of the line.