Your singing is actually pretty good; the main thing you want to watch for is your intonation. I know that two weeks is fairly short-notice for audition turnaround time but some rehearsal could potentially help iron out anything that sounds pitchy. It helps to hear the pitch in your head first if there's a note that you're not sure of. But your sense of rhythm is excellent, and the tone you have in the dialogue is pretty close to what I imagined. Plus your vibrato on the melodic parts in the beginning is nice and smooth. Thank you!