Hello there, we wanted to let you know that, in our opinion the quality of your recording is not up to par with the standards we require for this project. Also, we noticed that your acting experience is also not refined enough when it comes to this specific audition. Though, if we'd give you direction, it would be: we need you to project a lot more emotion in your lines, more variety in pitch when you're delivering them and you should talk way louder. You're more than welcome to retry your audition and we'd love the re-evaluate! Thanks for the effort, we really appreciate it! Have a great weekend! - DbLiveOnline.