Hello there, we'd like to let you know we like your audition so far! Quality is good, delivery sounds great, articulation too! One thing we'd love for a possible retry would be the pitch to be a tad higher. The only thing that really takes your audition to a big no no are your screams. Be sure to practice these via YouTube tutorials or join a discord server with voice acting communities where you can ask them for advise and make sure to take any critique possible to get where you need to be. Thanks for the effort!
Alright when I got the time (which will probably be in two days) I'll try to make it better!
Awesome, man. Lookin forward to it! And have a great day =D