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Cryshulvo for James
James is in his mid 20s. He is Kamela's boyfriend who is kidnapped with her. He steps up multiples times to take the beating for her.
James is slightly under-rated, I think because he is soft-spoken and somewhat tight-lipped, and yet, when the situation arises, he is quite noble and heroic, which nobody sees coming. There's not much information about his family or background...other than he and Kamela have been dating for nearly 2 years.
Kamela asks, "Couldn't you sleep?"
"Not really. I was too worried about you. My sleep was filled with nightmares of what happened last night." His eyes swelled with tears.
Antagonist threatens Kamela. He says " I knew I couldn't trust you. "
"It was my idea!" James interjected in defense.
(Same tone) 'Let her go, Darius!"
Begging not to be killed or tortured.
"Please...please, Blade. D-don’t...don’t kill me!"
Good quality - I like your tone with that last line, begging Blade to spare James. I think that first line is a bit too whiney for James. While he is a quiet, more feminine of a man than average, he really is the strong one when Kamela needs him to be. Maybe you'd like to re-read that first line...? And even the second. He really is the strong defender when it comes to protecting Kamela.
Thank you for your feedback. I will redo those two lines.