Anime Voice Acting Tournaments
seahaas for Role 2
Despite managing accounts and staying above the books, (Role 2) has an interest in the excitement of (Role 1)'s work. Being behind a desk all day balancing ledgers for their father's partners is not stimulating them enough. While perhaps inexperienced, (Role 2) is full of a fiery passion to get away from the law, and into the family business. However, her passion is seen as an obstacle by (Role 1) as it is (Role 1)'s goal to keep (Role 2) safe. This leads to a lot of resentment from (Role 2) towards (Role 1). As a result, while (Role 2) may be a softer and refined speaker with their peers, a far more unrefined and vulgar speak comes out when addressing (Role 1). This may result in more slang and offensive language despite their education and level of normal day to day sophistication. Truly bored with the day to day details, (Role 2) is ready to jump at the first sight of danger and excitement.
Line 1: "I think there are better ways to run our organization in regards to the humanity we show people. Not everyone needs to die." (Strongly attempting to illustrate their point.)
Line 2: "Someone got there before you did..." (surprised at the start but trails off into a horrific realization.)
Line 3: "Don't you think I know that?... (breath)... All I'm saying is that we should weigh all of our options before going to the last resort." (aggravated, then collecting themselves and restating their point.)
Hello Seahaas! Thank you for your auditions we are excited to go over this one, and hopefully provide some insightful feedback! Line 1: Right off the bat it feels like there is a tenseness in your stomach or diaphragm. Now it may have just been us, but we think it gives your character a sound of having physically inflicted damage on their persons. Without direction, it is understandable that you wouldn't know that this isn't the case. However, you do seem to relax the further you get into the line and it starts to sound a lot more natural, and in our opinion a bit better, or at least as intended! (of course you couldn't have known) We also would have liked to see a bit more expressiveness in the read over all! Still a very good read! Line 2: This line is rather short and a bit difficult to put too much critique into! We thought it was a really good read especially with as little direction as we gave. It also seemed to have confused some individuals. The realization aspect was difficult for people to convey without knowing more information and we believe that is also what happened here. "before you did" may have been better off a little bit slower, to convey the character has some slowly turning gears going on connecting point a to point b. Not much to say, it was a difficult line! We enjoyed this take on it! Line 3: You were on the path to perfect! we like the feeling of injury here to better illustrate the point! The only criticism is that there wasn't enough explosiveness and it wasn't as radical as we were wanting! You gave us a sip and we wanted more! Really good work! Overall: Don't be afraid to really exaggerate your ideas for a read! You definitely have a good sense of what and where something could and perhaps even should go! Definitely worth doubling down and refining even more! Thank you for the wonderful auditions again Seahaas! We have plenty room in our discord if you were more interested in taking part in some of the future events or even some of our smaller projects coming soon, we do have a link to our discord on this and all project pages posted here on CCC. Feel free to come join the community!
Thank you again for the feedback, it is definitely welcome since I'm new to all of this. :) I think the biggest thing I need to improve in terms of emotional range is that explosive anger lol.