Warhammer 40K Fan Story - The Heathen's Intent part 1
VirginVergil for Helbren (Read Description)
Description: (Voices will be edited as they are wearing helmets that use audio amplifiers, unless they have their helmets off)
HELBREN: Apothecary (Serious, tends to shoot down DRAMMONs joy but keeps it in good manner) - The squad’s apothecary, an expert in geno-medical knowledge, HELBREN has seen about any and all injuries known to the imperium. Healing and assassinations define his warrior style, he’s always equipped with enough to aid or kill any living organism. As a veteran of countless battles, HELBREN is fully versed in his role and in rendering aid to his fellow squad members. Although his duties rely heavily on close combat, he is versatile in his equipment selection. New wargear and weapons of smaller design are compatible with his armor, he has a variety of selections from ranged weaponry and geno-medical arsenal. He is usually studying new methods of battlefield medicine and rehearsing melee combat. The others view him as a master in the arts of close combat and are regularly trained by him. He tends to be serious more than the others but doesn’t let a good moment pass often.
* I ask that you reference the game Dawn of War 1-3 to get an understanding of the speech patterns and accent. I know its a lot to ask but I promise it will make sense once you start to comprehend the personalities portrayed in the Warhammer 40K universe.
* Here is a generic reference for the apothacary characters -
(Said with a bit of sterness) Thus meaning your training regiment is not on hold, Drammon. (pronunciations in description of project)
(Said while helping his fellow squad member up) On your feet, the Emperor will not allow you a simple death.
(Said after dealing with the imperial guard senior medic) I have given what aid I can.
(Said after seeing the orks approach) Orks, (grunts in annoyance) let us end this quickly.
(Said to the senior Medic of the imperial guard) My aid may not always be needed, but there will always be death, that I am sure.
*Extra lines - The sounds of combat
Charge!
Destroy them!
Do not worry brother!
Taking fire!
Death is upon you!
Gut them!
Sounds of swinging a sword/throwing a punch
I will give you my honest opinion based on the character you tried for, you are welcomed to message me to discuss it further if you disagree with my idea: Be sure to read to pronouncement of each name in the project description, once again its not a make or break issue. I like how your voice is throughout these lines, the only thing I can say is the ending lines could be a bit quicker, the combat sounds are suppose to sound like the characters in combat but honestly that is such a minor thing its not really important until selection of voice actors is made. I think this character might be a good fit for you, but i will be fair and impartial when selecting people for roles. I do hope you keep in contact though because theres going to be at least 5 parts for this first story and i promise you, you will have a role if youd like. You got the voice my dude! I hope this feedback is welcomed lol also Im not a professional in voice acting, I'm going solely based on what Id like for this character to sound like so please dont be discouraged in any way. Stay in touch for future projects because i have lots to go around and could use a good voice actor