[Eclipse Studios] unOrdinary - fan comic dub
not-on-helium for Elaine
Elaine is very nice and friendly, but only if you're not weak or a cripple like John.
So which school did you transfer from?
So, John. What kind of ability do you have?
What did you just say? I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS! DON'T TOUCH ME! Gross. I can't believe I just spent all that time talking to someone like you!
WOW!!! I think you did a fantastic job on this audition! Your voice really suits Elane! Though one critique I have is that there isn't much emotion, especially in that last part. Maybe try reading the end lines with more anger and disgust? Anyways good luck for the part!!
than you very much for the feedback!! i’ve been sick recently, as i was with this audition, so emotion has been harder to express without voice cracking or sounding really nasally, haha. but i’ll keep that in mind! if i get cast, i’ll do my best to express more emotion!! thank you!
hiii I like your voice too! I'd work on emotion as well, like Aqua said :3 though there still is time, hopefully your voice and sickness gets better soon
thank you so much!! currently it just seems to be getting worse but we’ll see how that goes xD i really really appreciate the feedback and support!!!
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