Our Dying World (RPG Maker Video Game Lead Female/Others Needed)
Esog for Pride
One of the 7 Deadly Sins, Pride is... well, proud. He has his own agenda when it comes to the plot of the story, and he's not afraid of speaking out and getting what he wants. Cocky and manipulative, he is also capable of having serious moments. He should have a Tenor 2/Baritone ranged voice that's a little deeper, smarmy, and more rough around the edges.
Please take note of the line's directions, noted in the *asterisks*.
*cockily* Ashton… been awhile, huh? Can’t I drop by to see an old war buddy?
*still smug* To have your power constantly limited must be the worst thing you can do to a person. To be honest with you, I mainly want to help because I feel bad for you.
*surprisingly serious* Fight my champion! I want to see if you can really pull this off, even in your weak state. Beat it, and you can take my weapon. *he chuckles* What do you say? It’s a pretty good offer!
I like your smooth tone and your conversationalist way of speaking! My biggest suggestion to you is switching up your recording space--it's sounding very echo-y right now. My recommendation is recording in a closet! (That's what I do, lol) Clothes are the best free dampening substance!
Thank you! I’m happy to redo them in a my usual spot if you’d like. I had to use a different space for these takes than I usually do. Hopefully will sound better when I’m back in the spot I have more soundproofed. I appreciate the feedback though!