I will give you my honest opinion based on the character you tried for, you are welcomed to message me to discuss it further if you disagree with my idea: For this character I say you did pretty good, just study that link i sent in the character description. You tended to fluctuate youre voice a bit more than needed, not a huge problem, just remmeber for the character its a robot husk. I know its not really a tip but im giving feedback based on this character, I like that you sent more than one try which is a good habit. From what Ive learned about voice actors when they send in audios to me its easier for me to fix mistakes or make edits when I receive three different trys per line. I know it can be tedious and annoying but look at it like this: You say the line in a happy tone, sounds good but the entire line isnt suppose to be all happy, then you say it again this time with a happy tone for only the first half, which is also good and narrows it down for variation purposes on editing, as in i would be able to cut the two lines and merge them together. Then you say the line a third time with only about a few words being in a happy tone, which is good also because at that point i merged the first two but this third line gives me an option to cut any wording or odd phrasing out you might have made. Overall man, im not a pro, I just know what i know through experience and working on audio dramas that i create and produce. I only know so much and i apologize i couldnt help more, but i hope you keep in contact because this will be a 5 part story and i promise there will be a role available for you! I hope this feedback is welcomed lol also Im not a professional in voice acting, I'm going solely based on what Id like for this character to sound like so please dont be discouraged in any way. Stay in touch for future projects because i have lots to go around and could use a good voice actor