Iji Family Can't Be Honest • Chapter 1
Sensationalprince for Office Worker
Office worker is a subordinate of Hatsutaro Iji, the father.
(Concerned, carefully giving advice to his superior)
Ahh. Well, she IS a high school girl, after all. She's in her puberty, so I'm sure it's difficult for you.(quick burst response)
EH!? BUT *YOU* SAID IT YOURSELF, CHIEF!(quick burst response - would like to hear the slight difference in intensity between the two sentences)
ARE YOU A LITTLE GIRL?! Your daughter complex is way too much!!
Hi and thanks for auditioning! I'd like you to browse through the comments I've left on other people's auditions and look for notes regarding the following: HESITANCY, SUBORDINATE, CONTEXT of the 1st audition line ------- ENERGY LEVEL of audition lines 2 (specifically how it should be around an 8). Also, you have a good idea of the EH as a narrative device, but it's not QUITE right. Look for comments regarding the EH in the other auditions, too ------ ENERGY of audition line 3 (level 10) and MAINTAINING the energy through the sentence. Those comments also apply to you and I think you'd greatly benefit from them. My apologies for not writing them here - we're getting close to the end of the audition window and I'm having trouble keeping up with the number of feedback I want to provide in the time I have! (a happy problem, I know). Sorry about that!
Thank you for the response and the feedback