Hi and thanks for auditioning! I'd like you to browse through the comments I've left on other people's auditions and look for notes regarding the following: HESITANCY due to employment position, SUBORDINATE, CONTEXT of the 1st audition line. In addition, I'd also hasten that up a bit, as it feels a bit on the slow side. ------- ENERGY LEVEL of audition lines 2 (specifically how it should be around an 8 - you're at around 8.5-9. Great work, but I'd dial you in a little bit lower in energy). Also, you have a good idea of the EH as a narrative device, but it's not QUITE right. Look for comments regarding the EH in the other auditions, too ------ ENERGY of audition line 3 (level 10) and MAINTAINING the energy through the sentence. You've pretty much got it, but read about the details of what I'm looking for. Those comments also apply to you and I think you'd greatly benefit from them. My apologies for not writing them here - we're getting close to the end of the audition window and I'm having trouble keeping up with the number of feedback I want to provide in the time I have! (a happy problem, I know). Sorry about that!