Iji Family Can't Be Honest • Chapter 1
Bherdlu for Haruko Iji
Haruko is a completely normal high school teenager with one little quirk: she's a father-con. After six years of living separately due to the divorce, she decided to move to her father's house to attend her high school.
(Nervously, can't hold back the emotion)
He said whoopsies... what is he, a little rascal?! Ahhhh--- Jeez, that's so cute!!(In a burst of emotion, can't hold it back)
His eyes that seem to look through everything, but also encompasses a sense of affection!! Ahhh! He's so lovable that I'm going to lose my mind!!(determination - an inner monologue)
You got this, Haruko! You're going to tell him!! It's your feelings towards your dad whom you love so much!!
Hi and thanks for auditioning! I'd like you to browse through the comments I've left on other people's auditions and look for notes regarding the following: NERVOUS energy, SHAKING, TRYING TO HOLD IT IN of the 1st audition line ------- QUICK BURST, as in SPEED AND ENERGY LEVEL of audition lines 2 ------ PENSIVE and INWARDS direction of audition line 3. Those comments also apply to you and I think you'd greatly benefit from them. My apologies for not writing them here - we're getting close to the end of the audition window and I'm having trouble keeping up with the number of feedback I want to provide in the time I have! (a happy problem, I know). Sorry about that!
No worries, thank you for the feedback!