Iji Family Can't Be Honest • Chapter 1
cBraunsen for Office Worker
Office worker is a subordinate of Hatsutaro Iji, the father.
(Concerned, carefully giving advice to his superior)
Ahh. Well, she IS a high school girl, after all. She's in her puberty, so I'm sure it's difficult for you.(quick burst response)
EH!? BUT *YOU* SAID IT YOURSELF, CHIEF!(quick burst response - would like to hear the slight difference in intensity between the two sentences)
ARE YOU A LITTLE GIRL?! Your daughter complex is way too much!!
Hi and thanks for auditioning! I'd like you to browse through the comments I've left on other people's auditions and look for notes regarding the ENERGY LEVEL of audition lines 2 and 3, as well as NARRATIVE DEVICE of "EH?!". Those comments also apply to you and I think you'd greatly benefit from them. My apologies for not writing them here - we're getting close to the end of the audition window and I'm having trouble keeping up with the feedbacks! (a happy problem, I know). Sorry about that!
Thanks for the input! I'll definitely browse through the other comments.