Of Tail and Feather
CARLOS SAVANT for Thorn
Thorn is an evil rat who is the leader of thieves who prey on the small and weak. always taking for himself and with his crew of mice minions, they leave only ruin and misery. He has caught wind that a ancient powerful artifact is being transported past his territory, and he MUST have it!
"Minions! prepare the birds for flight! Hurry up! that amulet is worth far more than all of you combined and I won't have it be taken from me, just because you lot won't pick up the pace! "
" -growls in frustration-....Curse you Hazel Willowtail! this isn't that last you'll see of me! "
"Finally....after all these years, the amulet is MINE! "
Hey not bad of an audition buddy! A bit plosive heavy at some parts so you may wanna watch out for that. Also, I'm not sure if the slate was really necessary since your username and audition is easy to see and understand given the layout of the site. Nice work at the improv you've probably overstepped the allowance given for audition improv. Sometimes the director wants to hear the original take alone and it'd be cool to have an alternate take with improve but since the project stated "amount of dialogue in this film is minimal", perhaps adding more dialogue on your end may be counterproductive. Anyways, these are just my two cents on your take so good luck!
Gotcha. I'll keep my improv in control then. And thanks for the advice!
very Expressive voice you have there I can see this in the final product