Iji Family Can't Be Honest • Chapter 1
Weav for Narrator / Bakery Worker
As Narrator, you'll have a handful of lines. As the Bakery Worker, you have two lines. Willing to accept male or female voices.
(Narrator - think nature documentary)
Iji Hatsutaro. 41 years old. Father. Iji Haruko. 15 years old. Daughter.(Narrator - nature documentary)
The daughter who ended up living with her mother after her parents' separation
Decided to move to her father's house to attend her high school.
A father-daughter reunion after six years.(Bakery worker - Cheerful and happy)
Thank you for your patronage!
Sure! 1. Between the two voices, for a narrator role, I think I like the first voice! — 2. I think your first audition lines are pretty much where I’d like it! The only thing I’d change is the delivery of the daughter’s information. I’d have you delivery it EXACTLY like you did with the father’s information. This is personal, directorial preference, and is not a standing rule for narrators (of course). — 3. For the second line, I’d slow it down a bit. Nature documentary narrators are conveying information, and the pacing becomes rather important. If we call the current pace as 100%, I’d shoot for 75-80% speed, with generous pauses in-between appropriate/naturally-feeling places. — 4. As for the third line, I like the delivery - but would like it in a different energy. Take a look at the manga for the context: the worker is saying this line to a customer who is leaving the shop. Considering the distance between them, your delivery needs to be aimed at his back and it has to cover the distance. Not necessarily LOUDER per se, but rather LONGER in DISTANCE. Right now, the distance is rather unclear to me at the moment.