Iji Family Can't Be Honest • Chapter 1
Weav for Office Worker
Office worker is a subordinate of Hatsutaro Iji, the father.
(Concerned, carefully giving advice to his superior)
Ahh. Well, she IS a high school girl, after all. She's in her puberty, so I'm sure it's difficult for you.(quick burst response)
EH!? BUT *YOU* SAID IT YOURSELF, CHIEF!(quick burst response - would like to hear the slight difference in intensity between the two sentences)
ARE YOU A LITTLE GIRL?! Your daughter complex is way too much!!
Great implementation! Thank you for being able to take directions and make the changes. It says a lot about you as an actor. :) --- I'd say you're pretty much where it needs to be for audition line 1. I'd try to take you to a slightly younger-sounding person, if you're able. As for the 2nd and 3rd line, the delivery itself is great. The EH device is sitting nicely and it sounds good. The only thing lacking is energy. These sudden bursts need to come out in full force from the get-go. Right now, I'd rate the energy in those sentences to be around 6. I need the 2nd audition line to be at an 8 and the 3rd audition line to be at a 10-then-8 - ARE YOU A LITTLE GIRL at a 10, and YOUR DAUGHTER COMPLEX IS WAY TOO MUCH at an 8. Of course, I'll leave it up to you to make the changes and resubmit if you'd like. :)