Thanks for submitting! Much improved on the context of the first line! There's a much better sense of who you are and who you're talking to coming from your tone and delivery. Well done! Love the energy! I know, as a director, that if you can achieve that level of energy, then I should be able to direct you to be softer. The other direction, for those actors who have trouble with infusing high-level energy into their reads, is much more troublesome and difficult. Thanks again and good luck!