Iji Family Can't Be Honest • Chapter 1
Voicedome for Haruko Iji
Haruko is a completely normal high school teenager with one little quirk: she's a father-con. After six years of living separately due to the divorce, she decided to move to her father's house to attend her high school.
(Nervously, can't hold back the emotion)
He said whoopsies... what is he, a little rascal?! Ahhhh--- Jeez, that's so cute!!(In a burst of emotion, can't hold it back)
His eyes that seem to look through everything, but also encompasses a sense of affection!! Ahhh! He's so lovable that I'm going to lose my mind!!(determination - an inner monologue)
You got this, Haruko! You're going to tell him!! It's your feelings towards your dad whom you love so much!!
Sure! I’d like you to go see what I’ve said for SamSoul’s audition, as the same information for all three audition lines apply to you. :) I was going to write it all out, but you and SamSoul can benefit from the exact same information. —— Your levels seem to be ok - the quiet parts could be louder and the louder parts could be smaller. I’d look into how to use a compressor to even out the audio a bit. BE CAREFUL - overuse or misuse of compressors will REALLY taint your audio. But if used the right way, I think it’ll do wonders for your audio. —— In audition line #2, I think you may be too close to the microphone, as I’m getting these wind (?) sounds from your mouth in the recording. Especially for an energetic delivery, I’d increase the distance from the mic and set the gain level accordingly. — I hope these comments are helpful. Thanks and good luck!
Thank you for taking the time to respond to me. I appreciate your guidance and insight and I will use it to improve.