Hi and thanks for auditioning! Since you asked, here are some feedback. 1. I love the intensity of your voice in the loud parts! You’re unafraid to let go in front of the mic and that’s a good thing. —— 2. It’s a bit too aggressive. This tone is better used in auditions for roles like soldiers, generals, thugs and etc - but this would not necessarily fit an office worker wearing a shirt and tie. —— 3. In the 3rd audition line, the difference in energy between “are you a little girl?!” and the sect sentence is too big. If I were to assign a number to the energy level, I’d want to hear a 10 on “Are you a little girl?!” and an 8 on “your daughter complex is way too much” —— I hope these are helpful. Good luck!