Bone | Out From Boneville CHP1 comic dub pilot
Cryshulvo for Fone Bone
Fone Bone is the straight man of the group. A natural leader who just wants to help his cousins out of a jam. Very resourceful, caring, and brave when it matters most.
Occasionally gets peeved with his vain cousin Phoney Bone's schemes to make money, he will always be there, to help the ones close to him.
"Good point Smiley. If we don't find some shade soon, I'm gonna have a stroke."
(Scene where they are in the middle of a dersert)
"That's as big as maps get, we're in uncharted territory."
(talking to Phoney Bone after he asked where they are on the map)
"Shhh! Wait a minute! You hear that?"
(hears a swarm of locusts coming)
Excellent the quality is much better. However the line reading is what is throwing me off. I think it would help if you saw the comic panels the lines are ripped from. So you can get a better idea how they are supposed to be read. Try to find the first book online or in your local library and go off that. Lets go one more time. You nail this 3rd take you got the part.