Bone | Out From Boneville CHP1 comic dub pilot
Cryshulvo for Fone Bone
Fone Bone is the straight man of the group. A natural leader who just wants to help his cousins out of a jam. Very resourceful, caring, and brave when it matters most.
Occasionally gets peeved with his vain cousin Phoney Bone's schemes to make money, he will always be there, to help the ones close to him.
"Good point Smiley. If we don't find some shade soon, I'm gonna have a stroke."
(Scene where they are in the middle of a dersert)
"That's as big as maps get, we're in uncharted territory."
(talking to Phoney Bone after he asked where they are on the map)
"Shhh! Wait a minute! You hear that?"
(hears a swarm of locusts coming)
Not bad, I do appreciate the energy but it's not right for these lines. I blame myself for that one, I can't put the scenes along with the dialog here. So this is when the trio are resting . Fone Bone is just casually talking with his cousins about their predicament. Also the audio, I noticed there is some static in the background. A little audio tip, you might want to put a sock or fabric over you mic to "better" the quality . Or even record in a closet, even put a blanket over you while recording. Other than that, your voice suits the character. Give it one more go with my advice, and you might just land this role.
Thanks for the comments. I will redo it and upload it now.