heyo thank you for your audition :3 I have something to say: unfortunately you have a lot of rhythmic problems and you also make a lot of false notes, both combinations prevent me from hearing the potential of your voice. Can you redo your hearing by learning the lyrics and rhythm of the song correctly? You can sing it in a short version if it suits you, we have not set any time limit for recording.
I'll be able to send other recordings I have if that helps I do have plenty of them as I am in cover groups and do a lot of singing if you'd like I can send one of those and see if it's any better