Female VO for Pest Control Company Commercial
flyingturtle for Female VO
The final script is :60 and is supposed to be read as if reading a children's book. You should be able to see the way it rhymes and such.
Audition Lines:
The snow lay still on the ground.
And family had gathered in town.
The table was set. ‘Twas nothing to fret…
‘Til critters began sneaking around.
A squirrel ran down from the tree.
The pepper and salt,
Were under assault,
And presents were nabbed by masked thieves!
Termites chomped at the chairs,
Not a single stocking was spared.
Mema’s holiday broach,
Was replaced by a roach,
As spiders made webs in her hair.
someone give me feedback
Hi! If you would like some feedback, I'm happy to offer some. =) That's how I learn as well, and getting feedback really helps. You have a lovely voice. I might practice your pacing to make it flow a little better. It is a storybook style read, and there is a rhyming component, but it still needs to sound natural, like you are actually talking to someone. One tip my coach always gives me it to have someone specific in mind and then read the lines as if you are having an actual conversation. In this case, maybe talking to a child. Hope that helps! Great job!
Thank you very much! I hadn’t thought of that! I appreciate your feedback