Online Audiobook : The devil's shadow (Novel adaptation)
LianneJennifer for Valentina (Vanessa's friend)
Valentina is Vanessa's collegue and is very triggering. Whilst she sometimes can be very bitchy and annoying, she's mostly happy and ALWAYS hungry. She has a big sweettooth and can't keep away from candy (or eyecandy ;P ). She is also obsessed with looking good and her pasttime is staring at hot men without shirts.
(Curious) Does my bum look good in this?
(Excited) Oh Em GEEEEE!!! You look hot as fuck in that!
(Excited, happy, annoying) Can we get one of those huge icecreams? I've always wanted one!!!!
I like it. The way you extended certain words really brought more feelings into it. But I thought for the last line I wanted more excitement. For example, pretend you’re a young kid again and you REALLY want some ice cream from the ice cream parlor, so you have to persuade your mother to go along with it using your cuteness!
I will try that line again, later today. Thank you for taking your time to listen and comment ^^