Star Wars: Republic - Outlander (Comic Dub)
Gahmah Raan for A'Sharad Hett
A'Sharad is the fifteen year old son of the lost Jedi Hero A'Sharad Hett. During Ki-Adi Mundi's visit to Tatooine, he is currently undergoing his right of passage to become a Tusken Raider, though his father has also trained him in the ways of the Jedi. Despite his youth, he speaks calmly and acts very mature and honorable for his age.
Whoever has two hands can hold a Gaderffi!
Look, Ki! Father has rallied the warriors! He's split the riders into two groups - one to flank while the other draws fire!
This is a bad thing! I'll be driven into the Dune Sea! Away from the Clan!
This one's on me, but I think your A'Sharad comes across as a bit too brash. He's very polite and reserved in the comic.
I do like the voice itself, it it didn't come across in the prievous message. May I offer you to reaudition with a more polite and respectful performance?
Sure, I'll give it another shot. Some of the exclamation marks threw me off the first time. Some additional context might be helpful, especially if his mood changes.