Your Turn to Die: Fandub
Bagel0119 for Kanna Kizuchi
In-game, Kanna is shown to be a person that resembles "a little sister". She can be dependent and often relies on other people to help her out, due to the fact that she often believes that she is incapable of helping herself or others. Kanna is shown to be easily upset, and is one of the most vulnerable and unstable of the group.
(whimpering) "Ahhhhhhh.... OOooohhh...."
(on the verge of tears) "Ah... thank you very much."
(timid, still whimpering) "I'll say.... I'm Kanna Kizuchi."
(getting worked up) "After....I came here... My sister... My sister.... Ahhhh.. (start screaming) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! SHE'S DEAD! MY SISTER! WHY?! HOW?! IT'S MY FAULT! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!"
(calm, soft yet questioning) "Sara... I-I.. I just really wanted to ask you, about my sister. Please give me an answer.. Back then, could Kanna have actually save her sister..?"
I feel like you're on the right track, but you're holding back in terms of volume. Consider the circumstances: this is when survivor's guilt really hits Kanna and she loses it pretty much completely. Being louder in your screaming will work in your favor for this project. However you need to make sure it's not at the detriment of your voice. Hydrate and only do a couple of takes of the scream. I sense potential in you. :)
Thank you so much for your feedback! I’ll probably re-do my audition really soon!