The scream is better this time, but you could still go louder and more erratic because this is when the truth slaps Kanna right in the face. Also in the beginning, she sounds more bored than afraid and when she's thanking Sara, she doesn't sound like she's on the verge of tears. And while it's better, I feel like you could still lower the pitch a tiny bit to put her a little more into the early teens range. I believe in you. :)
Thank you again! I'll consider all of those and try it one more time.
This is really good! I also think you’d be a great fit for a project a friend of mine is running. It’s a fan dub of the anime Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni. Let me know if you’re interested, and feel free to audition :-) https://www.castingcall.club/projects/closed-auditions-higurashi-no-naku-koro-ni-2