I feel like you're holding back in terms of emotion and the screaming. Going all the way for both are vital to the game, but especially the screaming. When she's starting to tell about what happened to her sister, it sounds more like you're just explaining it. At this point, Kanna's experiencing extreme anxiety and survivor's guilt and I didn't get that from you. Also I'm not really getting the little sister vibe that Kanna has in the game and the voice sounds a little old for Kanna. You have potential, though.