Your Turn to Die: Fandub
artdart for Kanna Kizuchi
In-game, Kanna is shown to be a person that resembles "a little sister". She can be dependent and often relies on other people to help her out, due to the fact that she often believes that she is incapable of helping herself or others. Kanna is shown to be easily upset, and is one of the most vulnerable and unstable of the group.
(whimpering) "Ahhhhhhh.... OOooohhh...."
(on the verge of tears) "Ah... thank you very much."
(timid, still whimpering) "I'll say.... I'm Kanna Kizuchi."
(getting worked up) "After....I came here... My sister... My sister.... Ahhhh.. (start screaming) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! SHE'S DEAD! MY SISTER! WHY?! HOW?! IT'S MY FAULT! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!"
(calm, soft yet questioning) "Sara... I-I.. I just really wanted to ask you, about my sister. Please give me an answer.. Back then, could Kanna have actually save her sister..?"
I feel like you're holding back in terms of emotion and the screaming. Going all the way for both are vital to the game, but especially the screaming. When she's starting to tell about what happened to her sister, it sounds more like you're just explaining it. At this point, Kanna's experiencing extreme anxiety and survivor's guilt and I didn't get that from you. Also I'm not really getting the little sister vibe that Kanna has in the game and the voice sounds a little old for Kanna. You have potential, though.