Keeper of the Lost Cities Comic Dubs Final Call
Heftythrower for Keefe Sencen
Keefe is quite the character~~ he's a wisecracking prankster, a flirt, jokester, and smug (in a harmless way). He also has a huge crush on Sophie, and does dumb things because he thinks he has to. Under his jokester mask, he's really sincere, caring, and broken. He wants to make things right, and he feels like it's his job, and that doing it will make him a better person. Definitely a fan favorite character, especially in the Sophie shipping universe (I ship Sophitz tho~). Aged 14-16
I have heard quite a few auditions for this character, and he is a role I want to find a relatively perfect fit for. There's been a few auditions I was pleased with acting wise, but I also want to find the right voice for Keefe, which is proving to be difficult. Please don't let this intimidate you--this is just so you know that if I don't choose you, it's probably because I just don't think your voice fits the character.
What are you waiting for?
Don't tell me the great Sophie Foster is afraid.
Want me to push you? (off a cliff--this isn't a line) *laughs*
Come on, it'll be fun--for me, at least.
Well, last time we were kinda falling to our death and stuff, so it's a little blurry. But I'm pretty sure I just cling to you and scream like a banshee while you tear a crack into the universe, right?
Not bad! However, I noticed you had some pacing and inflection problems. There were a few times where you paused and you shouldn't have, your pause was too long, or you didn't pause when you should have. But overall I think you have good clarity and tone, thanks for auditioning :)
Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on my pacing with your direction.