Project: Vigilante, Game Changers Arc
WickedWert for Alvah Marcello
Deadline: 7th November 2019
Voice/Language features: Casual with some slang; cusses sometimes (add them where you see fit); deep (late teens - early twenties), but not overly so; British accent is optional (if you do try the accent, please also record your voice without it for comparison, unless it's natural)
History and relationships: Childhood friend of Reaper; Ace of Spades, i.e. right-hand man and friend to Rai
Personality: Very laid back attitude, and dislikes work without profit. Tends to tease or mock people quite a bit, especially Reaper, but he's not cruel and he has a heart, he’s just trying to be entertained, which may or may not often lead to fights and general trouble. Often mediates between Reaper and Rai.
Feel free to vary the tone or wording of the lines, I'd be interested to hear what you have!
Dismissive, threatening
[Sighs] "Listen up. princess. Unless you want me to hand your hide to you on a silver platter, you'll do well not to bother The Spades."
Sarcastic, unenthusiastic
"Right. Of course. Helping some kid look for their lost bag is going to help save the world."
Mocking, sarcastic, insulting but in a cheery tone
"You, princess? Beat me?" [Laughs] "Since when did you get a sense of humour?"
Genuine praise
"On the plus side, you're actually getting stronger. Well done, princess."
Monologue; informative with tones of sarcasm and no enthusiasm, later followed by irritation
"Yo. Alvah Marcello here. Do I know Reaper? Yes. Do I want to know Reaper? Hell. No. Unfortunately, I've been with her since we were little brats, clearly because I had nothing else to do. She's as sharp as a spoon, so who knows what sort of messes she would have gotten into without me watching over her. What? Me? [Chuckles] Nice try. Any information on me is classified. Wait...she what?! WHEN?! [insert a cuss you think is suitable]. That idiot just doesn't know how to keep still, does she? Sorry to cut this short, but I have to go." [mumbles] "How are we even friends?"
Your pitch, tone and emphasis on words as well as pacing are great! This could be just me, but it sounds as if your use of emotions is just a little weak to begin with, but it gets better as you go on. I enjoyed your laugh in particular, sounded very natural, well done on the audition and thank you!
Thanks! I agree with what you said. If you’d like, I can reaudition. Just let me know, and I would be happy to!
Sure thing, that would be appreciated, thank you!