Your Turn to Die: Fandub
Creator-Sama for Kanna Kizuchi
In-game, Kanna is shown to be a person that resembles "a little sister". She can be dependent and often relies on other people to help her out, due to the fact that she often believes that she is incapable of helping herself or others. Kanna is shown to be easily upset, and is one of the most vulnerable and unstable of the group.
(whimpering) "Ahhhhhhh.... OOooohhh...."
(on the verge of tears) "Ah... thank you very much."
(timid, still whimpering) "I'll say.... I'm Kanna Kizuchi."
(getting worked up) "After....I came here... My sister... My sister.... Ahhhh.. (start screaming) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! SHE'S DEAD! MY SISTER! WHY?! HOW?! IT'S MY FAULT! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!"
(calm, soft yet questioning) "Sara... I-I.. I just really wanted to ask you, about my sister. Please give me an answer.. Back then, could Kanna have actually save her sister..?"
You've got a good base frame for Kanna. However I feel like you're not putting in enough emotion. You're holding back and it's important to give it your all. The screams are also extremely lacking. Screaming is so vital to this game. Please don't be afraid to give it your all.
Oh, the screams were something I was extremely concerned about, since I know that the text box for this specific scream is way longer than I actually did it. I'll re-rec the audio with some changes (the intonation and the screaming will be remade and, hopefully, will be improved) I hope my next try reach you expectations! ^^