You've got a good base frame for Kanna. However I feel like you're not putting in enough emotion. You're holding back and it's important to give it your all. The screams are also extremely lacking. Screaming is so vital to this game. Please don't be afraid to give it your all.
Oh, the screams were something I was extremely concerned about, since I know that the text box for this specific scream is way longer than I actually did it. I'll re-rec the audio with some changes (the intonation and the screaming will be remade and, hopefully, will be improved) I hope my next try reach you expectations! ^^