You definitely have a grasp on her, but the emotion sounds inconsistent at times. Like in the "my sister" before the scream, to me that sounded kinda peppy. At this point, it really hits Kanna hard that her sister is dead and I didn't really get that from you. Also, there's some static in the background and it kinda detracts from the audition. The screaming is okay, but I feel like you're not going all the way. Screaming is vital to this game, as is the emotion, so you really need to go big. The pitch also sounds a little high, especially at the end. And at the end, it also seemed like you were rushing to finish and skipped over "Please give me an answer." It also sounds a bit too loud. You have potential though.
thank you so much for the feedback! i was trying not to peak the mic aha so i didn't do the scream as loudly as in previous auditions i recorded. thank you again though! i really really appreciate the constructive criticism bc i want to improve <3