Not bad! I enjoyed this very much, but I feel like it was a liiitle fast paced but that's probably just me being picky! You've got some reverb going on, are you in an open space? You don't have to have a PERFECT area but the echo is a bit too much and it'd ruin the background music if you know what I mean? It'll overlap, your voice really makes me think of Rio though so you got that part down well, the only thing that's getting in the way is your environment ;w;