The Blood Star
Jacob Robert Lee for Okumaru Soki
Soki is the leader of the evil organization that targets Tomako. He is obviously the antagonist, but he has his reasons. His voice is deeper pitched with a rasp.
(yelling with confidence) You think you can escape ME? (laughs hysterically) (clenches teeth) You fool!
(evil tone, prideful) You don't know me, oh, but Tomako, (chuckles) I know you.
(pleading, fearful, yelling) PLEASE! (quieter, voice cracking, stricken with sadness) You don't understand why I did it. (louder) YOU HAVE TO UNDERSTAND!
You really are good for a beginner, you put a lot of emotion into the lines which is really good. One thing is that your microphone isn’t on the best of quality side, and the laugh could be worked on to make it sound just a bit more realistic. The last line I’d like to see a bit more sadder emotion as well rather than anger in a way. Otherwise, you did super good, and I really do see your potential! I’ll have to see who else auditions, but your chances are always there:
Thank you for letting me know. I will surely work on my voice!