Project Saikou (Bakuman Anime Fandub)
Dusknohr for Akira Hattori
Hattori is often portrayed as one of the calmer and more calculating editors in the series. He comes across as a very wise and experienced editor which leaves him raising his voice only when he sees it absolutely necessary to do so. He is very fond of Takagi and Mashiro and continues to be interested in their progression as mangakas, offering off-hand advice to Miura when he can.
Hello, this is Shounen Jack's editorial department.
Is this your first time submitting something?
Is that so? Then could you give me your name and phone number?
I'm Hattori from the weekly Shounen Jack. It's a pleasure to meet you. Well, to start with, may I see your manuscript?
*Chuckle* You don't need to be so uptight.
Well, I'll give you my opinion on the story first, okay?
As a whole, it's a well-put together sci-fi story, and I think a lot of people would be drawn into it.
But, this is more a novel than it is a manga. There's just way too much narration. Unless your story develops through characters and art, it will never be a manga.
