Bludgeoning Angel Dokuro-chan Fandub [Short Clip]
WordsOfFate for Dokuro-chan
A 12 yr old killer angel who wants to play. High-pitch, since she's 12. Also, please reference the clip in order to get a better idea of how the line should be delivered.
[ Reference Time Stamp: 4:40 ]
(Happy, hoping to persuade) That's right, so you should play with me instead ~
[ Reference Time Stamp: 4:30 ]
(insistent) It says it right here in the books, look! (quickly summarizing) The boy who's suddenly confronted by a cute intruder forgets all about his homework and is supposed to get zeros all the time!
[ Reference Time Stamp: 5:06 ]
(upset/frustrated yelling) WaH you're NO fun at alll !! (whining) Come ON, let's play together, Sakuraa!!
I love the pitch your using for her, it fits really well !! That aside, the delivery of the last two lines should be a bit different. For the second one (4:30), she should sound a bit more determined as she tries to prove her point, and it should be done at a quicker pace. For the third one (5:06), since she's yelling, it should be louder and express her extreme frustration. Again, I recommend referencing the clip! Overall, I enjoyed your audition!
Congrats!